Drafts of storyboard

This here is my draft for my storyboard. I wanted to first to write down the shot that i will be using in my music video before doing a final piece of my storyboard.

1. Close up of her face with tears in her eyes
2. Close up her wiping the tears away from her eyes
3. Close up of her starring at the camera looking emotional 
4. Close up her face looking down
5. Medium shot of a flashback of her and her boyfriend being a happy couple
6. Close up her staring blankly into the camera with tears running down her face
7. Flashback of her and the boyfriend in happy times
8. close up of her face 
9. establishing shot of the place where she will be walking across a bridge. shot 8 and 9 will be blended together.
10. will be a tracking shot until i reach a close up of her walking 
11. close up her side way walking
12. medium shot of her but from the front
13. medium close up shot of her looking down 
14. long shot of her full figure
15. long shot of her walking towards the camera
16. start zooming in again to her face
17. close up of her just looking emotional 
18. close up of her about to cry 
19. extreme close up her from the side 
20. flashback of the couple 
21. flashback of the couple
22. flashback of the couple